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*Jack Frost X Reader*

‘Do you feel lost?’
‘Why should I feel lost?’
‘Because your vision seems to be blurry!’
‘It might be because of my tirdness.’
‘No,it`s not!You`re lying to yourself!’
‘I`m not!I`m just tired,that`s all!’
‘Can`t you hear the calls?Hear them,please!I need you to hear them.I want you to acknowledge me.I`m a part of you.’


The female fluttered her eyes open,watching through blurry vision the surroundings.She let a heaved sigh escape her lips,as her whole being felt as if burning alive,her breath coming in short rasps and every single muscle aching.
(Name) hated snow.It made her ill,caught in bed for weeks because of her fragile immune system.She couldn`t actually afford skipping classes because of a simple cold – as she called it – and she didn`t want to miss those simple things the others could actually enjoy,such as building snow fortresses,playing tag through those puffy white blocks of star shaped frozen tears – because if you actually watched closely,when it was about to snow,the sky turned dark grey and soft blacks and the clouds cried – they cried with pretty delicate white flakes which caught two by two in a dizzy waltz until they touched the frozen ground,covering it with a layer of pure white.
Though she was certain she got over her cold,the female still felt sick.She could barely stand on her own feet as her legs turned jelly,starting to shake and causing the said girl to hit the ground and scrape her delicate skin.
(Name) couldn`t bear being so weak and she also hated being pitied.Because of her fragile nature she had lost a lot – belonging to an actual group of friends as she got sick and couldn`t respond to their hang outs,having a guy to like her as the other girls had – she hated how guys at school treated her – as if she was a porcelain doll and she was to break if they touched her.
She felt pretty lonely – and she actually was – as everyone avoided creating a bound with her,sweetly holding her hand,kissing her goodnight,wishing her the best at an exam,embracing her when she was down – (Name) hadn`t experienced such things and she was afraid she would never do – she wanted to feel the snow touching her skin,the wind dancing with her – those things people called simple and stupid meant the world for her.
Tears pricked at the corner of the female`s eyes,but she wiped them before they even threatened to fall.Wave after wave of warmth and salted pearls were stubbornly wiped,sobs estomped and the thread of insecurity growing considerably.
Missing the humid of the atmosphere,the girl threw off the covers of her and sat on the edge of her bed,watching with indulgent and longing expression the outside world.
That certainly wasn`t a cold anymore – (Name) thought – it was something above that.She might as well risk it all.
Putting on her winter overcoat,she tip toed outside the house,inhaling the smell of frozen snow.The female`s cheeks were pinched by the cold,as well as her frail hands,but she didn`t care as she intently listened to the crunch of the snow under her boots – which she found funny as she advanced through the big piles of frozen tears.
Everything was enveloped in white – the neighbouring houses roofs,some cars which were left in the driveway,the trees whose branches hanged above the ground,ready at anytime to snap and fall because of the weight – the whole world including the horizon line seemed to be a serene white powdered scenario.
The air was a mixture of cinnamon and pine trees,amplified by the crispy wind which brought them to every single corner.
People were happily talking one to eachother,dressed in coats,wearing boots,gloves,hats.Every item which could keep them warm.
Everyone but an individual.The female watched him with curious (e/c) eyes,her mouth shaped in an ‘O’ as he sat there by himself on the frozen bench.
He certainly had the most uncommon features – snow white spiky hair,baby blue eyes which rather could be as well turquoise,fair white skin – and he was dressed in only a navy blue sweater and a pair of light brown tight pants,ripped to the bottom,right above his foot wrist – adding the strange fact that he was wearing no shoes.
“Uum…mister,aren`t you cold?” the female asked in a soft voice which seemed to jingle in the atmosphere.
“Here,you can take this!” she continued before actually receiving an answer,wrapping her navy blue muffler around the unknown`s male neck.
He watched horrified as the girl did that – as if she was quite a strange creature,not him for walking like that on a cold winter day – but even if he didn`t show it,he was quite happy someone wanted to interact with him.
“I don`t need your help,you know!” he coldly answered,returning his gaze to the horizon line.
“Well,I guess you don`t!I`m sorry about that,I actually start doing what I hate myself!” (Name) smiled weakly,scratching awkwardly her neck.
A pressuring silence settled between the two of them,broken by the female`s gasp as she tried to reach for the small flying flock of sparkles.
“Aifen,please!You weren`t supposed to get out now!” she said with a small squeak,the red headed chibi landing on her palm with a pout and his arms crossed over his chest.
The white haired male poked the small creature with his index finger causing it to growl in frustration – unlike his master,Aifen was a really rude and tsundere being,constantly arguing and cursing – even if (Name) told him not to.The little fire entity bite the male`s finger,the last one retreating it as fast as he could as he gave the small one a glare.
“Oh my God!I`m so sorry about that!I thought him to be good towards people,but he always does whatever he wants!” (Name) started to panic,scolding the chibi entity which hid behind her (h/c) locks.
“So…you are a guardian too,huh?” Jack questioned the obvious,nonchalantly placing his cold hand on the female`s burning forhead.
“You are warm!” the blue eyed male continued,watching her with a confused expression.
“I`m like this eversince Aifen has appeared!And strange things have happened too!Is it even legit to burn some things with the power of just staring at them?I guess no,but you get what I mean,don`t you?” (Name) rapidly talked,fluttering her arms in the air.
“You are funny,fire guardian!” Jack chuckled at the female`s silly attitude.
“What`s your name?” he asked the now calmed girl.
“(Name) (Last Name)!” she simply answered,watching his reaction.
“Good (Name)!I`m Jack Frost!And it seems that I`m quite your opposite,being the spirit of winter!” he responded,a smirk growing onto his pale features.
“So…you can make it snow like…right now?” (Name) questioned,cutely pointing her index finger to her lower lip.
“I could do that,but I don`t feel like it!” Jack stuck out his tongue,preparing to make his leave.
“It was nice to meet you,but I have stuff to do!” the white haired male ended,his steps almost inaudible in the crispy snow.
“Wait!Could you,please,make it snow?” the (h/c) female pleaded,her voice lullying wind to sleep.
“I`ve said I could,but I don`t want to!See you!” he finally said before disappearing.
“Aww,what a meanie!” (Name) pouted,crossing her arms over her chest.
“Let`s go home,Ai!” she ordered in a honeyed tone towards the red haired chibi,at which he nodded.
Something cold and soft hit the female`s nose tip – thing which caused her to look up and gasp in surprise.It was snowing,big white flakes getting caught in the (h/c)`s headed locks.
Maybe Jack wasn`t that bad afterall,now,was he?
This was a request made by :iconartisan-garden: .
I suck at life…sorry hun,I`ve seen only a little of the movie and I`ve tried my best not to make Jack too OOC – meaning that I always think of Prussia when I look at him and it leads me into temptation!!!
I`m sorry for this failure,really!! TT^TT

So…
Jack Frost – The Rise of the Guardians
You – You

I own nothing but the plot line!~

Aifen is your little fire spirit,meaning that you are a guardian too,Reader~chan! I`m sorry for the fail,really…

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Comments are appreciated!~ :iconstolenkissplz:
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:icontwillight-moon:
Twillight-moon Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
more plz?
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is a part two.:) vanillasuu.deviantart.com/art/…
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Iceland4 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
I didnt see any of the movie. -.-" my "little sister" (really good friend) alise made me watch the first few min of it. Meh oh well
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh,you didn`t? That`s a pity though. Maybe you`ll get the chance one day. :D
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Iceland4 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I want it for christmas
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes,yes! That`s a nice idea. :3 I just can`t wait for Christmas. 
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Iceland4 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Yeah
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PPGmakesmesmile Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
meh you're pretty close, only diffrence between the two is one is less arogant, although not by much
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha,really?! xD I always tend to compare them.:3 I guess Prussia is the more arrogant one? :D
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PPGmakesmesmile Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Eyup, but only because he feels less alone than Jack did, Jack had almost no one, he was cool with Sandy, but not really close, Prussia has Germany, Spain, and France. He has friendemyship with Hungary and gets along okay with the Axis members. Jack only had a omnipotent being that didn't talk to him, and a mute buddy, and creepy teeth-fangirls, see how this works.
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dawh..... is there a part 2?
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes,there is!~ [link]
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, thank you
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kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Part two?
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! :3 I`ve just written it. [link]
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kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Kit : ahhhahahahhhhh *dies*
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute!!!
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!~ I`m glad you enjoyed. :3 :iconjack-frost-plz:
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Np and thank u for writing it :iconpervyjackfrostplz:
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You have nothing to thank me for. It was a pleasure writing it.:3
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpraisethesunplz: :giggle: :iconpervyjackfrostplz:
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Rin-Lombardi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
AWWWWW~~~~
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha!~ I guess you enjoyed,eh? :D :iconjack-frost-plz:
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Rin-Lombardi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
[link]

Very Very Much.
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha. Those feels. xD You made my day.:3
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purpleprankster99 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
So cute!! I noticed you said you were from Romania, such a beautiful country! I am German and I know how it feels to mess up on writing sometimes, foreign disease XD great story!
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Germany!!! //inItalysvoice Ahem! Thank you,I really love my country.And I think that about Germany too. I`ve got an auntie there and an uncle. :3
Yes...especially when it`s a more complicated word...I feel like writing it as we write it in my native language or in French *the second foreign language I learn*.
Thank you.I`m glad you have enjoyed it. :D
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purpleprankster99 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Your welcome. Germany really is a nice place and I came to America when I was 6, I still have a very thick German accent. With very big words in English I usually slaughter them to the point where they aren't reconizeable. I am learning Spanish and learning French. My accent in both of them is horrible and my French cousin lets me know that...every time I see her...
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love German accent. x3 It`s so dang cute!~
Wow,Spanish and French.Plain awesome.I`ve got more of a French accent rather than German,I only know to read decently in German. xD
I`m trying my skills in English too,talking with British accents and so...but I was like slapped for 100 times before pronouncing them as I should...-.-'
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purpleprankster99 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Thanks! I rather like my German accent as well. Guys always say its sexy when they hit on me...well ok then XD I guess a German accent is sexy. I really don't think of myself having an accent because I am German but everyone else says I do. Yes Spanish and French are awesome languages, now I know all of BTT's languages!!! Yay!!! Well I have been to Spain and France and whenever I am trying to order something in French it sounds really bad...I hope my French accent improves!!!
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It will,with time.You just have to take random texts and read them out loud.
Or try to make conversation with people in French.It`s really nice.How all the accents roll off...I used to talk to my aunt in French,because she`s really good at it.And it helped me improve a lot. :3
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purpleprankster99 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Thanks for the advice :) I will do that. I wish I could talk to my family members in French but my family is all from Germany, well besides some of my family back in Europe but they are all half German or something like that, I love French accents and I really hope your advice helps my accent! Merci beaucoup!
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Avec plaisir! I hope really it helps you. :) I sometimes try to write texts in French or rewrite some songs and I read them out loud.One nice song is Calogero - En apesanteur. I recommend it.This way you do something plesant and learn. -> [link]
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love German accent. x3 It`s so dang cute!~
Wow,Spanish and French.Plain awesome.I`ve got more of a French accent rather than German,I only know to read decently in German. xD
I`m trying my skills in English too,talking with British accents and so...but I was like slapped for 100 times before pronouncing them as I should...-.-'
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ARW1860 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Aw this was so cute!

May I ask.... What country are you from? I noticed "foot wrist".....
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!~ :iconslowhugplz:
And well,I'm from Romania. :D
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booklover4life Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM ROMANIAN AND I THINK THIS IS A REALLY CUTE STORY!!!! Aw hi there lil Chibi!!
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!~ I`m really glad you`ve enjoyed it! :iconmoesmileplz:
P.S.:I love your icon!~ :heart:
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booklover4life Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh ha! Thank you very much!!
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
For nothing!~ :3
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ARW1860 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :D

Really? That's so cool! :D I love Romania. It's such a beauiful country!

I love the character too! :XD:
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.It really is a beautiful country.Every single country is.:)
Ahaha,I quite like him too,but Uh-Oh,it feels so awkward,because I see him like a big bro or something.xD
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ARW1860 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Yes, they are. :D

And yeah, it's the same with me. That's why I usually write him as a child or a best friend.

I did write one where he was a love interest, but it was awkward.^^;
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TwiztedDagger Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
It's fine... I'm a red-head, and I get sick easy in the winter.... Love summer, but I burn too easily.
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I get sick easy all the time.xD Especially in winter.So I know the feel... :iconsweethugplz:
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Ninjawriter7 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, you really have a gift for sensory details and description! Your writing style is absolutely beautiful, keep up the good work! :D
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG!!! Thank you,I appreciate the praise!*bows* And I'm really glad you don't think my obsession with details is boring. :iconbrohugplz:
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Ninjawriter7 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! And no, it's not boring at all! I love getting that clear mental picture from lots of details~ There aren't enough other writers on here that pay that close attention to the little things...
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!And I know what you mean.While reading I imagine how someone should look like and so on and so forth.
It makes things better.:D
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Ninjawriter7 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly! It enhances the reading experience, and makes the characters and situations more relatable.
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