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~Spiel strasse~

*Teacher!Prussia X Student!Reader*

'If you want to find out
What love is about
And if you are lonley baby
Just open your mind
You're one of a kind
Just gotta live your life...'

The older Beilschmidt contemplated,his head in his hand,while the students wrote.It was the final exam,as the teenagers were to finish their Senior year.
Blue inked pens hit the blank pages,circling correct - or thought to be correct - answers,filling in the gaps,differently coloured orbs reading at an incredibile speed the text - it was a fragment from Goethe's well known piece of art,'Faust',as the German teacher thought nothing would represent better the language than the classical literature,the cradle of melodical harmony and both religion and moral -.
The male let a small sigh escape his lips as his own ruby red gaze wandered through the mass of students.
They were a good class,indeed.But each class has his black sheeps - with whom the Prussian male got accustomed from the very beginning,as he himself wasn't really a model for others -.
A certain someone caught his eye though and made things a lot easier - meaning that it balanced both the sick jokes of the wannabe's and the general grade,making the class a plesant way of passing by the time.
That certain someone had a name - and she had a pretty name at that,which the Prussian tried many times on his lips - he absolutely loved how it sounded .The girl's name?(Name) (Last Name)!
What Gilbert loved about her,weren't her (straight/curly) (h/c) locks which were always put into either a messy bun or a sophisticated braid,neither her (gem) (e/c) eyes which held a burning passion inside them,which gave everyone a little piece of the female's soul - how much she loved to live - ,but the way she spoke German - how fluid and coherent were her sentences,how vaste her vocabulary was,how fast she could read a text and deliberately comment on it,how the accent rolled off her tongue made people think she was native - but that was far from the truth.
The first time he had a class with them,he was surprised by her.Because instead of responding with a simple 'Hallo,mein Name ist (Name) (Last Name) und ich bin (years) Jahre alt!',she continued in a surprisingly good German.
Questions such as 'Entschuldigung,ich habe eine Frage' or 'Ist das so richtig?' were frequently leaving her lips,ending with a nod of her head,a pretty smile on her face and an excited 'Ich danke Ihnen für Ihre Hilfe.'.
She was a straight A student and he expected from her the best at that paper too.

~Time skip~

The Prussian scrunched his nose in disapproval.What was wrong?He hadn't expected the girl to do that bad on the test.
Was Goethe way too deep for her?Well,he doubted that,taking into account her reaction when he gave the students a fragment from Heidegger - who was way more profound and hard to understand - and at which she did great.Or how he would say,awesome.
They've went through Rilke's pieces too and her essay was not to be doubted.
Then,what could have happened?As the shy knock at the door could be heard,the male responded with a simple 'Come in'.
The girl made her way towards her German teacher,bravely waiting to be scolded.She stood still as she always did,but from time to time she bowed her head down with shame.
She wanted to avoid that ruby red gaze which always made her weak in the knees.
"I can't believe zhis test belongs to you,Miss (Last Name)!I vas positive on zhe fact you vill get ze best mark,as alvays!" the male started,dropping his glasses on the desk with a small thud.
He rubbed soothing circles with his big and his index finger at the end of his eyes as if stress would fled out of him by that.
"Vhose paper had you done?" he asked nonchalantly,patiently waiting for her answer.
The female parted her lips a few times to give an answer,but she couldn't.It was as if someone strangled her on the moment and she was out of breath,unable to mutter a single word.
"(Name) ... you are my best student!I will cancel Miss' (Best Friend's Last Name) paper if you do not admit!" the albino continued,running a hand through his silvery white hair.
"She wasn't feeling well.She was really pale,you should have seen her,Herr Beilschmidt!(Best friend) needed that mark more than I did." (Name) responded,her voice shaky as she played with the ends of her frilly white skirt.
"Hov have you done zhis?" the red eyed teacher questioned,his arms crossed over his chest as he intently listened to her.
"I have signed my paper with her name and I told her to do the other way round." the female confessed,bringing her head up to meet the Prussian's gaze.
"Please sir,just don't tell her parents.She will get scolded and I'd rather take that than see her suffer.You don't know how harsh her parents treat her.I accept to be punished for what I have done and I also accept that mark!" (Name) ranted,amusing the said teacher.
"Look (Name) ... because you are my favourite student,I will pretend nozhing has happened.Miss (Best friend's Last Name) will have the mark on the paper you had done,but you are going to rewrite the test right now." he seriously said,bringing out a paper and a pen.
The female nodded,a smile blooming onto her features as she grabbed the pen between her slender middle,index and big fingers,writing with pretty curved letters the white paper.
The (e/c) eyes went through rows,reading with care the already known topic,putting down developed ideas she only thought of previously,a precious seriousness onto her face.
In a matter of time,she had finished,passing the now the blue ink letters filling the page to her teacher.
"Thank you,Herr Beilschmidt.I don't even know how I'll ever be able to thank you enough for what you have done for me!" the female said,playing with her hair by curling it onto her index finger.
"Vell,zhere vould be somezhing!" Gilbert started,capturing the girl's attention.
"If you allow me to,I'll change that last name of yours!(Name) Beilschmidt sounds way better than (Name) (Last Name)!" he ended,chuckling.
It was now or never.Either the girl would slap him and storm off angry or she'll accept his feelings.The albino gulped,hoping that the knot in his throat would be gone - but it didn't,as fear built up,gradually growing.
"Well,I wouldn't mind that!" (Name) finally answered,giggling.
The Prussian smiled a sincere smile - not one of those cheap filtratious smirks he would give the others only for the sake of it - laughing his snake like laughter.
In the next instant,he enveloped the girl into a tight hug,planting his face in the crook of her neck.
"But you'll have to convince dad first!" she said in between laughs,as Gilbert gasped.
Well,quite a task,wasn't it?
His stiffened shoulders loosened when the girl planted a ginger kiss on his pale cheek,warmth rushing to his ghostly complexion.
He brushed his fingers through her soft locks,taking in the sweet scent.
One of his arms snaked around the fragile waist of the girl’s,the other bringing her frame closer to his until she could feel his breath tickle her peachy skin - Gilbert was hesitant at first,but feeling her so close to him as if their bodies molded,he gave in - and placed his own lips onto hers,which started moving in rhythm with his.
Their eyes fluttered close,enjoying the new feeling - feeling which brought a pleasurable wave of warmth to the Prussian's chest as he abused the female's lips and a big amount of emotion taking over the girl - they ignored the outside world as they were falling into bliss.
"Ich liebe dich,(Name)!" Gilbert said when he hesitantly parted for air.
"Ich liebe dich auchGilbert!" (Name) answered,caressing the Prussian's cheek with her soft palm.

~Time skip~

The sky was painted a velvet black,small points,almost unseen,shining in beauty,skattered around the moon.
The albino abused the steering wheel,taking left and rights with care,as (Name) sleepily contemplated what she could see from the scenery.
Arriving to the front patio,the car let a final purr as the Prussian rotated the key into contact,turning off the engine.
He didn't like saying goodbye - not after what happened earlier between him and (Name).He smiled though,knowing that tomorrow will be another day when he'll see the pretty face of the girl - and not only as her teacher,but also as her boyfriend.
Gilbert cupped the small frame of the girl with his large hands,bringing his lips onto hers for a short kiss,as (Name)'s father tapped his feet on the ground.
"Uh...I'm sorry,mister (Last Name)!I have ... Ja ... Brought your precious daughter home!" he shakily said,rubbing his neck awkwardly.
"I'll see you tomorrow,meine Frau!And don't forget,Ich liebe dich!" he ended,waving the female goodbye.
"Ich liebe dich auch,mein Mann!Immer..!" she responded,a content sigh escaping her lips.
"In house!Now!" her father commanded,visible irritated.
"Ja,ja,vatti!" she saluted in a playfull tone.
"No German,please!I had enough for one day!" the male said,causing his daughter to giggle.

'Never kiss a girl on her front porch.Love is blind,but her father certainly not.'.

Das ende
‘Spiel Straße’ (German) = ‘The street of game’
‘Hallo,mein Name ist’ (German) = ‘Hello,my name is’
‘und ich habe … jahr!' (German) = ‘and I am … years old!’
'Entschuldigung,ich habe eine Frage' (German) = ‘Excuse me,I have a question!’
'Ist das so richtig?' (German) = ‘Is this correct?’
'Ich danke Ihnen für Ihre Hilfe.' (German) = ‘Thank you for the help!’
‘Herr’ (German) = ‘Mister’
‘Ich liebe dich’ (German) = ‘I love you’
‘Ich liebe dich auch’ (German) = ‘I love you too’
‘Ja’ (German) = ‘Yes’
‘meine Frau’ (German) = ‘my wife’
‘meinen Mann’ (German) = ‘my husband’
‘immer’ (German) = ‘forever’
‘vatti’ (German) = ‘daddy’

Mention of
-‘Faust’ by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe (German poet)
-Martin Heidegger – german philosopher
-Rainer Maria Rilke – austrian author
-The lyrics from the beginning are from a song – The Balkan girls by Elena Gheorghe

Gilbert Beilschmidt – Prussia

I own nothing but the plot line!~

So yeah,finally a Prussia X Reader which randomly came to me when I was humming that tune xD. Gil would do a great teacher and I would be eager to learn German if he was to be my teach!~
Lol,no Google Translate!!! So if I`ve got mistakes at the German phrases,bear with me,I`m not studying it.
All in all,enjoy!~

Prussia : *mark*
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Comments are appreciated!~ :iconstolenkissplz:

Edit 1 : Special thanks to :iconmiepmiepgilbert: for pointing the following :
-that instead of 'Spiel strasse' I should have said 'Schrittgeschwindigkeit'
-and instead of 'meinen Mann', 'mein Mann'
-Honestly love,thanks,German is indeed difficult and I`m trying my best ... -.-
Special thanks to :iconsincerlysimplysurely: for pointing that I should add 'alt' when expressing age.Such as 'ich bin 18 Jahre alt' ( I am 18 years old).In my native language we just say 'I am 18' and that`s all.
Thank you,once again!~
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4EverAotaku Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015
I'm pretty sure this is illegal, but who cares? Prussia's fit and it would be worth it.
puellamagi123 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
As long as they are both legal adults (18+) its fine!
Dragonheart4258 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i liked it. it was interesting...
pixiedust-95 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Real quick, the story was great, but there is a smol thing that's a bit off about the translations. For introducing oneself in German, you usually say "Ich heiße ___" which translates to "I am called ___" but if you're to stick with the translation you have, you need go out an 'e' at the end of "mein" which will make it "meine Name ist ____" as for "Ich danke Ihnen für Ihre Hilfe" you've essentially got it correct, it's just a tad confusing so switching to "Danke für die Hilfen" wouldn't hurt, besides, it means "Thanks for the help"
Hehe love is blind but her father isn't cx gold! And great fic!
Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
That quote made me laugh
Hetalian-Canada Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Quote unquote, "If your date brings you home late, I will be in the trees with my gun."
My dad can be a bit like Switzerland at times when it comes to me...
FallAutumns Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That's the best kind of dad though. :)
Mylittlecloney Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
That totally sounds like my step-father. He is super, freakin', tall. On the out side he is like, "You hurt my daughter, your fucked." But he is really more like a big Teddy bear. But my father wants me to have someone who likes video games and is a little smart, if they are as dumb as a sack of dirt then it an immediate nope.
kanda-nezumi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016  Student Photographer
Reminds me of Netherlands... Suspicious Kirito 
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well,he is a great dad then. He just wants to protect you. :) His reasoning is good. If he likes video games,the guy is trustworthy.
Mylittlecloney Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
Yeah, they are both great.
happyhetaliastuck Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
Love is blind but her father is certainly not. That's like my dad. When he heard that my new bf kicked my ex in the leg and sent him flying into a door, my dad's like: I like this new guy, he's a keeper
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha. I like your dad. And your boyfriend did just well. Applause for him. He had a legitimate reason,hadn't he?
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I laughed at the line v'Never kiss a girl on her front porch.Love is blind,but her father certainly is not 
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've laughed too while writing it,but I didn't laugh when my dad gave my boyfriend the Sweden stare because he kissed me before parting. xD Just imagine this :iconswedenstareplz:
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow your dad sounds scary I wish my dad was like that when I go out with my boyfriend or a guy friend my dad tells him to have fun and to use protection and my mom is the one giving the Sweden stare
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welp. Dads are different. xD Mine is...well,yeah. I assure you,you wouldn't like to have a dad as mine...
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would trade with you any day your dad sounds AWESOME my dad is a little to easy going
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww,haha,dad trading. That doesn't even sound half bad. xD //slapped
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you okay? Yeah that dad trade doesn't sound half bad *avoids ninja throwing star*
Kira-Jones Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
SO CUTE >u< I love this so much I wish Gil was my German teacher TnT

Vati only has one T sorry! DX I just yeah sorry!
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ Well,there would be a bunch of people out there who would love him as their German teacher. I would actually and I'd be a pro for him. xD

Woah. Sorry,the author has this problem - adding unnecessary letters. xD Thanks for poiting it~
Kira-Jones Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Of course who wouldn't XD

no it's fine I always get that mixed up my teacher's always getting on us about that
MissPinkGirl2890 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha. xD I hope it's the good  kind of 'OMG'. :3
Sunflowerllama Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This was awesome! XD I really liked it. Question, why didn't the father freak out more? Did he not know it was her teacher? I don't have a father but I do have a mother and I'm pretty sure she would explode with rage if I was dating a teacher. o.o
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The father didn't know Gil was the teacher. xD 
Yeah,mine would too. :'O
And thank youuu!! <3
Sunflowerllama Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. XD I guess he never went to a parent-teacher night or has a really bad memory. 
You're welcome!!!
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well,haha. xD I guess nope.
CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
OMG this was spectacular! The level of german is like, cray. (maybe cos I don't know any!!) lol 
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Danke! *bows* Haha,well,I know some,but not too much. And some people around helped me too. :3
CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
Well, it was AWESOME.
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!!! :iconawesomesauceplz:
xofandompridexo Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Me likie!!! :)
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ :heart: ^u^
yommyjoker56 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student
Word, my dad is the same way
each year when i get a young dude teacher hes soo suddenly pissed off
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... Woah,are you for real? O.o
We had this new maths teacher who was a hottie,though didn`t teach at our class,but I`ve talked to him several times. My dad was so pissed off. xD

yommyjoker56 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student
lolz butt i dont get y are they like that :-/
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... they are just overprotective. xD All dads who have daughters are so. I guess it is because they know how tricky guys can be and they want their 'princesses' safe. Cute,but annoying sometimes.
yommyjoker56 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student
my dad take it seriously
he doesnt want emos or jocks or ANYTHING!!!
If i get guy like that my takes his friend out (gun)

......Thats y guys are scared of me....
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean!!! T^T My dad thinks that if a guy has a tattoo/piercing or dresses more like a hipster,isn`t worth.
And they get scared too...

Lemme hug ya! :iconbrohugplz:
yommyjoker56 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student
sniff sniff
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You`re welcome dear! :iconlovehugplz:
GuardiansOfTheNights Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cassandra: I totaly love the ending! But you have a little mistake with the german. In Germany you say: "Ich bin ... Jahre alt." And I just hope I didn't made mistakes with the english... :o
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ Everybody seemed to enjoy it. :3
Um,that`s how I`ve written it... I haven`t written otherwise...had I? :0
teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
awww...yeah I don't think that any dad would want his daughter dating
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all. Believe me,I am 19 and my dad is still skeptic about dating. xD
teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
thelonepuppetmaster Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ending quote; loved it!
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