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~Slut ögonen~

*Viking!Denmark X Reader X Viking!Nordics*

The days were harsh upon the Northen lands,as wind blew cold,ruining the already weak plants which were supposed to feed people around.
Denmark didn't seem to have though such a burdening weather as the other three countries,though when wind came and hit the shore,it just seemed to sweep everything in its way - as the inhabitants did with the conquered lands.
Accustomed to the sunny days from down south - which rarely were either cold or rainy - (Name) couldn't help but feel both sick and gloomy.It had a great impact onto her,not to tell the fact that she was a stranger among people she couldn't trust.
What really kept her alive was the thought that (Brother's Name) has probably reached the extrem southern area,brought to shore by gentle people and taken care of greatly - instead of cold nipping at his skin,he bathed in raw warm sunrays,instead of his lips bruised by frostbit,they were dried from the hot summer air - that kept her heart at peace for a little bit.
Closing her tired eyelids,hair sticking up from the effort she previously undergo,one of her temples against the wooden part of the front door,she felt once again back to her homeland - as a beautiful illusion,the emerald green grass kissed by the sun's gentle rays developed in front of her,children from around the village begging the (h/c) to narrate a fairytale which they lived - gasping here and there,their petite eyes widening in surprise,throwing their palms over their mouths - all of that was a soothing image for her soul,tears pricking at the corner of her eyes and silently escaping the now dull (e/c) orbs.
Stubbornly wiping the tears away with the back of her palm,(Name) decided it was the best to finish the chores before Matthias was going to reach the home they shared.
If it wasn't for the tall Dane to be so agresive and for the (nationality) girl to be his slave,they were almost to pass by as a couple - staying under the same roof,the female preoccupied with the cleaning and taking care of Magne,the blonde going out hunting and bringing firewoods home.
Checking onto the small boy,(Name)'s lips curled up into a smile as he was sound asleep,his breath inaudible as he clinged with his tightened fists onto the blanket which the female drapped better over him.
Looking down at the basket full of clothes and then at the weather outside,she couldn't help but sigh - but took the coat over her shoulders and went outside.
Even if the Danish land was mostly perfect curved hills,the more one advanced towards the coast line,it became more of a frightening view,scaring people off,hard to climb then even more hard to descend as it became abrupt.
Getting to the edge of the lake,the (h/c) got onto her knees,putting the basket near the water and getting one of the clothes there - trying to dip them deep into the water,the female cringed at the coldness,though she didn't complain and did what was supposed to and went further on.
The way back was a shake of her abnormal red hands,purple bruises across them.But when (Name) finally reached the warmth of the house,she felt genuinely blessed.
Having everything prepared,she sat down in front of the burning fire,feeling once again her hands - though the bruises were still there.
Hearing the front door hit the wall,only to be shortly closed,her (e/c) eyes met the three Viking males who made their way to the main room.
Motioning for the female to make her leave,she nodded in approval,not daring to say a single words besides a greet - the Swede's navy blue eyes went straight for her hands,scrunching his nose in disapproval.
"Vad gör ar du?Hon är en kvinna, inte en slav!" Berwald's deep accented voice cut through the warm atmosphere,low and threatening.
"Vad vet du om det?" the Dane answered,his light blonde eyebrow cocking in an arrogant manner.
"Nog!" the third male requested,his voice as monotonous as ever.
(Name) placed her body against the hard wall,hearing the Northen males talk something onto a whispered tone - her hearing became suddently acute,though the only things she could make out of the dialogue was only 'krig','dödsrädd' and 'hatat'  - but that wasn't enough to comprehend.
Maybe it was nothing to find out - and maybe,just maybe,it was for the best that she didn't know.

~Time skip~

First snow fell upon the Danish land,more of a timid powder of the frozen flakes from the gray canvas.It wasn't even half way through October as that happened,but considering the cold winds which always pinched at the exposed skin even in the spring,the female brushed it off,seeing people act as always - so she came to the conclusion it wasn't such a wonder,as she thought about it.
Keeping the basket full of medicinal herbs onto her arm,she kept close,swaying it a little as she tried remembering one of those tunes she used to hum back in her homeland.
As she advanced to the medium sized home,snowflakes got caught into her (h/l) (h/c) locks,glimmering shyly.Reaching her destination,she got rid of the oversized coat at the entrance,making it to the main room,warmth embracing her petite form.
Matthias' gaze followed her,studying how her soft cheeks were a soft red from the coldness outside,the already melted snowflakes still glimmering into her hair,making it look lighter,those orbs which played into her orbits extremly deep and not so dull anymore.
The small Danish boy gasped in surprise,throwing himself into the female's direction,hugging her legs tight,as if his whole life depended on it.
The Viking loved those moments when she came back and Magne was so happy about it,because those were the only seconds when (Name) actually smiled one caring and maternal smile towards the boy.
But as soon as it came,as fast it disappeared,especially when she met the Dane's ocean blue gaze.
"Have you taken those stupid herbs of yours woman?" Matthias demanded,pointing for her to sit across from him.
"They are not stupid!Something which is useful in treating injuries and has its purpose is not stupid.You may call weeds that,because they don't help at all,but everything has its own use!" (Name) responded in the same manner,though her voice soft and more of an argument for what the male just said,arranging the down part of her dress in order to sit better.
"And to answer your question,yes,I did!" she sighed,toring her gaze away from his.
The (e/c) eyes of the female seemed lost as she watched in amazement the sparks dance,as if it was some sort of spectacle and it said a whole story.
Everytime Magne got them a little bit closer one to the other's soul,it was either Matthias refusing it,acting like he firstly promised he would,or (Name),who choose to put a veil in between them two and play her role.

~Time skip~

Magne was long tucked under the covers,but that wasn't all.The thing which was unnerving and caused (Name) to stay up that late was the fact that the Danish male hasn't arrived yet from where he was.
He usually was there by the time the boy had to go to sleep or if it was to be off at war,he would have mentioned this either to her or to the infant.But he didn't and that kept the (h/c) up,to panic and feel insecure.
Placing a hand over her stomach while pacing in the main room,the female felt stupid all of a sudden - why did she care about Matthias?Wouldn't it be for the best if he died in battle?She would be free to go and she could take Magne with her,raise him as her younger brother.
She would no longer be a slave and could go down south,take the land she inherited and build everything from scratch.Having both (Brother's Name) and Magne and being able to heal people was all she need - she needed peace.
Then why the thought of the Danish Viking made her heart ache?Was she really in love with him after the harsh treatment?That was insane - but for the moment,it seemed the only logical explanation.
The front door opened,hitting the wall,so the (h/c) assumed it was only the wind - though hearing it close back,she was sure that someone came.
Matthias was there - and her heart was at pace - but the sight of a bloodied Lukas made her cringe.
She motioned for the tall blonde to put him on the blanket she threw onto the ground,near the fire,gathering the stuff she needed - a small pot with cold water in which she placed some herbs and stirred,another one with warm water and some unused cloth.
Placing the white cloth into the cold water,she started working onto the several wounds,causing bleeding to stop as she pressed harder onto the spot.Lukas didn't seem to give any sign of waking up and that made her feel insecure - his pale body seemed quite torn up and the wounds could have infected if she wasn't to use something to clean them better.But what?
Her (e/c) eyes franatically searching for something she could use,(Name) asked Matthias for the bottle of alcohool to which he complied.
Just when the Norwegian felt the power of alcohool soaked cloth against his injuries he cringed in pain,his eyes still shut close.
After a work of hours - which seemed like years to the female - she finally managed to patch up every single wound Lukas had,combing delicately his hair out of his face.
"He is going to be fine!I am going to prepare a lotion for his wounds to dry and for him to get better sooner!" the (h/c) sighed,standing from her place near the Norwegian's sleeping form.
"You better be telling the truth!" Matthias said in between his grithed teeth,his ocean blue gaze upon the other Viking's body.
"Let me see that!" (Name) requested,at which the Danish male complied for once.
Cleaning his wounds with care,Matthias couldn't help but look down at her - she was so gentle,unlike her defensive state,applying with care the bandages she made out of clean clothes the male didn't use.
"You really seem to care about him!" the (h/c) spoke into a low,soft voice.
"But I guess that is not my care either!" she continued,fastening the last knot upon the white cloth.
"Ja!That's right! Not your care..." the Viking responded half heartedly,watching as she drapped a thin blanket over her shoulders,getting near the front door.
"Aren't you going to sleep?" he asked,his eyes travelling to the place where she looked.
"That would be reckless and so unlike me!I assume we are in danger if you and master Lukas came wounded as this!I'll just be on guard for tonight and tomorrow I'll start preparing the moisture!" (Name) responded,feeling a little bit better after the male's attention.
"Not that I actually care... But you might get harmed and you make a pretty good slave!" Matthias said,'tsk' ing as he took a wooden chair next to hers.
In the spur of the moment,one of his fierce arms encircled her waist,bringing the (h/c) into his lap.
"What the hell do you think you are doing?" (Name) protested,obviously flustered by the current situation - but her struggle to get out of his grasp was in vain.
"Just being a wonderful master,so don't complain,or I'll be sure to cut your lungs!" the blonde responded,a wolf like smile painted across his features as he said that.
It was going to be a long night...
Matthias Køhler – Denmark

Lukas Bondevik – Norway

Berwald Oxentierna – Sweden
© Hetalia,Hidekaz Himaruya

Magne Køhler – Greenland – OC © VanillaSuu

You – You


Story: © VanillaSuu,2013

Warnings: A little bit of




‘Slut ögonen’ (Swedish) =
‘close your eyes’

‘Vad gör ar du’ (Swedish) =
‘what are you doing’

‘Hon är en kvinna, inte en
slav!’ (Swedish) = ‘she is an woman,not a slave’

‘Vad vet du om det?’
(Swedish) = ‘What do you know about it?’

‘Nog!’ (Swedish) = ‘Enough!’

‘krig’ (Swedish) = ‘war’

‘hatat’ (Swedish) = ‘hate’

‘dödsrädd’ (Swedish) =

‘ja’ (Danish/Swedish) = ‘yes’



Why is the title in Swedish?
Why are Norway and Denmark
speaking Swedish? Well,that`s easy! The author here used her notes from the
Swedish extraclasses to write those. I don`t trust google translate because
it`s a barrel and fails me. So yeah!~

I know it`s a fail,but bear
with me please! I`m trying my best at not using river names or cities inside Denmark,because
I`m not sure how they were called back then and I don`t want to mess up that
much. And yes,we are influenced by the things we live,so I`m quite blocking my
brain from contemporany stuff. xD

I hope you enjoy it though!~
Love,Suu~San! ~


Chapter 1 :…
Chapter 2 : Here
Chapter 3 :…
Chapter 4 :…
Chapter 5 :…
Chapter 6 :…
Chapter 7 :…
Chapter 8 :…
Chapter 9 :…
Denmark :…
Norway :…




All I want for Christmas –
Hetalia X Reader  ->…

Love spell – Magic!Trio X
Witch!Reader ->…

Never forget – Iceland X
Reader ->…

Labyrinth – Romania X Reader

L`amore e femmina –
Mafia!Boss!Romano X Hacker!Reader X Secret!Agent!England ->…

Fem!Hetalia X Fem!Reader


Country X Reader ->…

Crack ->…

Other fics ->…

One or two part ->…


Comments are appreciated!~

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Anga99 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry for this but if you want the swedish to be right do this:
Take away the 'ar' from 'vad gör ar du?' or change the sentence to 'vad är det du gör?' it meens the same.
Change 'hatat' to 'hat' or else it means 'hated'.
Change 'dödsrädd' to 'död', dödsrädd literally means scared to death.
Sorry but I'm Swedish and I wanted to help you fix this.
Jonsukka Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No offence, but can you explain why there is sooooooooo much Hetalia X reader fictions? I don´t get it since I don´t dream of some Hetalia hunk kissing me.
I think it´s bit of annoying to find soo much of these, because I don´t want to read them.
PlainlyAwesome Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well in my opinion it's easy to pair a hetalia character and the reader together considering that there's so much room for creativity, like the talents of each country, their attitude around different characters (often just types of readers). Besides, there are a lot to choose from and they all have varying personalities.
Jonsukka Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, yes.
I don´t even know why I wrote that comment. The answer is obvious.
guess I had to ask.... =)
PlainlyAwesome Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand ^^
It is sometimes irritating when you look up something completely unrelated but Hetalia reader inserts appear anyway, so I do know what you mean and why you meant it c:
Jonsukka Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Good to hear! =)
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Damn that Viking!
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well... haha! xD Got to agree here! :D
shihachii Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DarknessOnMyEyes Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well... It's actually only "Vad gör du?", not "Vad gör ar du" :) And "hatat" is a past tense that is still actual. Like, "Jag har alltid hatat dig" would be "I have always hated you", which indicates they still do. If you want to say that it is in the past, you'd say "Jag hatade dig", which means "I hated you". I don't know what you tried to say since the full frase is not visible, but if you meant present form it would have to be "hatar" :) "Jag hatar dig" = "I hate you"
One more thing. I'm sorry if I seem pushy and annoying, but I think it would be best if you learned correctly as soon as possible, before the wrong word is stuck in your head :/ Dödsrädd would mean "deathly scared", or perhaps "scared of death". If you want the word for "death", it would be "död", or "döden" (the Death). "Död" also means "dead" :)

Otherwise, I'd say the Swedish is correct ^-^
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*takes notes* Awwies,you have no idea how much I love you for correcting my mistakes.
I really need to be told where I'm going wrong and you are such an awesome person for helping me!~
Suu~San loves you and I'll do my best from now on. In hope you'll notice me one day,senpai .
Don't you ever feel bad about correcting my mistakes!~ :heart: I'll edit everything as soon as I'll get my laptop back,because it's quite hard to do it from the phone... T^T
minchen0897 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
like i said in the last part/chapter, this is a high-level story, which i appreciate.
I really like this story!
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! *bows* I`m trying my best at it. and at not failing,which I quite do
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
D'awww this story is becoming so cute~ I'm waiting for more Suu-sama~ :D
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh. :iconheplz: Of course,I plan even more! There shall be more!~ :]
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes~! (On a side note, that icon is a little...scary...)
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww,haha! xD (Well,I dunno,it quite is,righty? *-*)
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
slowniczek Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Don't put yourself down! It's very good! :D
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww,really? :iconhappytearsplz: I`m so glad to hear that!!! :iconhappyskipplz:
slowniczek Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Jep! :)
Will there be more chapters?
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes,I will write more. I`m working on chapter 3 right now. :D
Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you onee~chan! :3 I`m really glad you like this fic with big brother Den.
Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
How to not like your fics? They're all perfect!!! And you've gotten better since your firsts fics.
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhappytearsplz: Thank you!!!
Well,I guess I did somehow... I don`t know how though! xD
Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Well, practice leads to perfection, right?
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It does indeed. :) And praise helps too.It motivates me to do my best.
Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Well, I guess it's working then! Because each fic is better than the last one. ^_^
CaroShadow Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Love Viking stories
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha,thank you! :D
I do too! *-*
agatstone Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
Dear it's not a fail. I can't wait to see how it will unfold further.
VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww!~ Thank you!! :iconiloveyouplz: I shall write more,promise. :3
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